Twins Redux

This is a gift to Margaret. Her email inviting me to join the Moon Shadow Tribe including the suggestion that I rewrite "The Twins."

For those of you who read my earlier version of this story some of this will be old hat, but there is enough new information that you should still find it very interesting. I have flushed out the backgrounds of the new characters I introduced. I also closed some of the holes that I left. I really flushed out the relationships of Aidan and Joey and Matt and Luke. I hope you enjoy this new and improved story.

Anyone wishing to read the original story please feel free to email me and I will send it to you.

I remember some conversations taking place on different QAF message boards about Brian needing to have another Alpha Male to spar with. I got to thinking about what the characteristics of this other Alpha Male would have to be and came to one conclusion--Brian would have to spar with himself. Then I decided that would be no fun so I determined a Brian clone with a serious personality flaw would do the trick. Well here is my take on that Alpha Male.

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